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There's something I'm feeling.
I'm not quite sure what it is.
I hear time is supposed to be healing.
But all I can think about is...

What?
What is it that I think about?
How my heart bleeds like it's been cut?
Or how much I want to scream and shout?

Can you see this?
Can you see the pain in my eyes?
Can you feel the loss of bliss
As my soul slowly dies?

Do you hear my silent screams
As I try to continue this upward climb?
I've lost all hope on my dreams.
It's time to end this silly rhyme.

My heart has finally bled out.
I can no longer ignore
What I cannot live without.
My feelings have been thrown to the floor,

And there is nothing I can do.
I don't think I can take another hit.
I can no longer stand up to you.
It's time for me to give up and quit.
This is a poem a wrote a month or so back but I wasn't ready to go back to these feelings so I can type it up here. But since these feelings are back, I might as well give you all another poem. I think the poems explains itself. I'm done trying. I'm just going to live my life in neutral. I hope you all enjoyed it. :)

Please comment! I love feedback. It can be good, bad, long, or short. I want to hear it! I would like to be able to improve future work for all of my lovely readers.

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NEVER EVER give up.....its like letting apart of you die ...and when you do that you can never get that part back....beautiful poem ...I could truly feel your pain and resignation in your words...but don't let it become your truth because if you allow someone to cause you to give up its like giving up control of you ....your life and your soul....and that is something no one else should ever own...if you don 't like something in your life you are the only one with the power to change it....get rid of the people who try to do it for you cuz anyone who is truely worth having in your life won't ever try to change you or make you feel bad about yourself or make you feel like giving up...you will regret it if you let them win...and regrets are THE biggest bitch you will ever have to live...I should know...I have had to learn the hard way...