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Heal



Move along just to make it through.
How can I move along
When I hurt so much?
When I want to cry,
Or scream,
Or hit something
When it comes to mind.
Why can't I handle this?
Why won't my heart heal?

It's all over.
The storm has passed.
But I feel so bad.
I've lied.
The guilt is tearing me apart.
What friend lies to their friends?
How can they even be called "friend"?
How can I?

I've put up a facade
And said everything is alright.
But everything's not alright.
It's darkened everything.
I can't think straight.
I try to avoid it.
"Those who forgot history,
Are doomed to repeat it."
Am I doomed to forever feel this?

Move along just to make it through.
How can I move along
When the more I try,
The more I fail?
This pain just doesn't
Seem to heal.
This is #83 out of 100 of the 100 day poem challenge.

I really don't have much to say. It basically explains itself except for what I'm hiding. :iconhideplz: I think it is best if it stays that way. :shrug:

Please comment and tell me what you think so I can improve! :D
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PeachyBunn Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student General Artist
The first line :icondeathstareplz: You got it from that one All-American Reject song, didn't you? Move Along? I lvoe dat song :iconteheplz:
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Invictus47 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah. I was just listening to that song and then it just fit with what I wanted to write so yeah. ^^;
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:iconpeachybunn:
PeachyBunn Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha thought so! I love that song. Nice use of it ^^
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Invictus47 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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:iconpeachybunn:
PeachyBunn Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Welcomes ^^
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caaaasbaby Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
OH GOD.
THIS IS JUST
PERFECTNESS.
NO
THERE IS NO WORDS FOR THIS.
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Invictus47 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconblushplz: THANK YOU SO MUCH! :D :love: :tighthug: :squee: :dummy:
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caaaasbaby Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
ANYTIME :icondragonhugplz:
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TheOneFallenAngel Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You Don't Need To Improve. It's Bloody Perfect, And Very Understandable. :heart:
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Invictus47 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconglomp2plz: THANK YOU SO MUCH! :D :squee:
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